When I review my first draft about (Normandale Community College) I added some information from my other classmate in review area. I found good comment from them that helped me to change and add new information for my subject. I like Review area because it helps students to know more about their subject from feedback from other students. I wrote about Normandale because I already have related with it and it was easy from me to write about something already, I have background about it. Also, I didn’t use sources in my first draft, but now I added sourses from different websites as Noramndale.com, Dectinaory.com, Google.com, and from other students. Finally, I review my first draft more than 5 times and I hope to be good and easy to understanding for reader .I like my subject.
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